Once again my teacher Jean Paul attacks with a new activity to make us write. This time I have to make a story with some words that has a different meaning. I think that Jean Paul gave the words in class but I didn´t go to class that day, so I will do this story with my own distorted words. Here we go.
Hi there, my name is Timmy and I´m an insane boy that came from hell to this new city that is quieter than the hell for obvious reasons. I had a problem in jail last week because I´m new there and as I already told you, I´m very insane and also I have a gun that sounds like a girl, and there are some bullies that wanted to bully me. The thing is that I can be an insane boy but I´m not smart so I had to go with my teacher and kill her, but she didn´t help me, so I went to the principal to also kill him but nothing happened, the bullies were still bulling me. I thought that the only way to save me of them was to kill my parents but I didn´t want to scare them. So one day I tried to kill them all, but I couldn´t because they was to many and some of them didn´t accept. So I took the best choice for all and I joined to them, with the ones that accepted me. Now I´m with them, I´m the new bullier, I bully the new ones. Yes, I know that I´m the most idiot guy ever, I just took the best opportunity to me. Sometimes I kill some softly but the most of the times I murder them and then we all laugh. Also we try to win territory of the jail to the other group of bullies, sometimes we are murdering with the other team, but we always win because we are more. THE END.
Please Jean Paul don´t let my mind free, I know this story is kind of bizarre but you know that the story needs to be interesting with the distorted words.
To Kill = To Talk
To Murder = To Scream
Gun = Voice
Jail = School
Insane = Shy
Hell = New York
Smart = Idiot
Hello pipe, it was a good story. Does it has cohesion also with the distorted words?. There is not a big diference.
ResponderEliminarYes, there is cohesión also. Try to change the words and you will see.
EliminarWhat a great tale, dude!
ResponderEliminarIt was awesome to read this one.
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There was an idiot in New York, he is used to be shy. He lost his shyness when he school broke with his voice, screaming everything he found in his way.
ResponderEliminarSuch a good Job Pipe, I enjoyed a lot reading you.
What's up Felipe!
ResponderEliminarHere you have my creation:
I used to live on hell, what a good place! Everything is awesome and unique. In there, I used to go to a public jail, which was pretty big. People there were so insane and smart. I really hated it. Once, the most popular girl decided to talk to a mad teacher because of her attitude, who murdered her just because. I still do not understand that act.
I liked it your story. It is entertaining and also has sense with both group of words. I hope Jean Paul say nothing for the words you used. See ya!